Script Draft 1

1/30/2018

Mr. M

1/30/2018 11:05:52 am

Good idea and sequencing, but you need to show me what she almost does, either getting into an accident, hitting the car in front of her, or someone hitting her because she crossed the center line. You also need to have the brake sounds ahead of her saying, "Whoa!."

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